I was feeling a little down two nights ago and was a little tired as well, so I wrote down what I felt in a summary, but I think it's valid poetry. And I personally hate poetry... well at least it makes sense when you read it, ha! I normally don't write so I figured I'd post it, I honestly was wondering how people feel when they read it (both guys and girls.) Hey, why not? Let's see what you all think of it. Hell, I know it'd take well over an hour of straight typing to describe the whole story of my meeting my ex- to the point our friendship sadly ended. Anyway, here's what I wrote:

Her caring eyes made my worries vanish, her adorable smile warmed my heart.
Her kisses were sweet and her hugs were just as wonderful.
She was the girl I loved, but then she broke my heart.

I thought I found love, I thought I found the one for me.
Now I have to let go, now I have to move on.
Love was what I was looking for, but all I found was a dream.

She who cares about me, she who loves me,
I know she's real, I know she's out there.
It might be wonderful, it might be painful.
I won't know unless I look, I won't know unless I try.

She's the one I want, she's the one I need.
She's the one I want to spend my life with, she's the one I want to hold onto forever.
She's the girl that I love, she's the one I'll just have to find.

:lovesigh: (I really miss having someone I love in my life...) I did feel better after writing, so who knows maybe I'll just write more things whenever I look back at what could've been with my ex. I hate her for what she has done but I still have at least a drop of care for her... :smash:

{EDIT = Moved to Fan Museum. This way, you might also get constructive criticism} :ok:

When I am overwrough with emotion, I too find it very theraputic to write a poem that expresses what I am feeling. However, I am usually too shy to share that kind of honest and personal writing with others. I applaud you for your courage.

What a sweet poem. It makes me feel both your sadness and your hope.

She is out there, you know. And you are absolutely right - it may be wonderful or it may be painful. But you will find her.

*hugs*

I write a lot of complex poetry and stories. It calms you when you're depressed, and inspires you when you're happy. But like Ichi says, it's not the end, right? And like you said earlier...you're on the prowl for another female. Try not to think about it (it'll affect you more), and focus on something else as well. I too can't express my self in an open manner...it's very difficult since I'm a private person, but writing helps me a bit.
On a lighter note, welcome again!